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Thursday, 20 February 2020

Beach Day - Similes

WALT: use similes to make our writing interesting.


The waves were like thunder that was crashing on a stormy day.
The sun was as bright as a lamp that shines in your eyes.
The waves were as long as a bus that is filled with noisy children.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 11:38

    Hi Maunganui school I love the way you put how the waves look like and how they felt like.
    Q. Would you go back to that beach.

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  2. Anonymous22 May 2020 at 12:21

    Hi Maunganui school I like your blog it's very interesting next time maybe make it a bit longer.
    Q.)
    How many times have you been to that beach

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